Cayman Islands Writing Exemplar

What’s Next? Identifying Targets for this Student:

 

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AF 3 – To improve organisation, the author should work towards including opening and closing sentences. The 

opening sentence should set the context for the small moment and provide the reader with some information 

regarding the “who,” “what,” and/or “where” questions (e.g., “I went to the pool on Sunday”). A personal feeling 

statement is an appropriate closing for Level 1 writers (e.g., “I really liked the pool”). 

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AF 2 –The inclusion of a title would improve the author’s overall achievement. A Level 1 title is generally  

predictable and usually directly states the small moment (e.g., “At the Pool”).  

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