50 Successful Ivy League Application Essays

Demonstrate How You’re Different
“Why are you different, really different, from all the other kids who are 
just as qualified? Don’t portray yourself so that any other student could fill the 
same spot you’re asking for.”
—Colin Adamo, Yale University
Start Early
“Start early so you have enough time to brainstorm an idea that will be 
enjoyable to write about. It’s very important to write about something that has 
either made a big impact on you, that you love, or that shows your personality. 
That way, it will be less of a chore, and it will really show through if the essay 
is meaningful to you. Also, (a piece of advice I was given my junior year), if 
you start early, you can write up the essay early enough to go back and look 
at it after some time, returning with a fresh new perspective. This will help 
a great deal. Finally, be fully aware of all the essay topics, due dates, and any 
important announcements or changes, so that nothing stresses you out at the 
last minute. The college application process is a stressful chore, so it is best to 
be organized and have a good attitude from the beginning. Essay writing and 
editing is a lot of tedious work, but if you give yourself enough time for it, it 
can be a fun and transformative process as well.”
—Maya Ayoub, Harvard University