Students who work part-time have to spend the majority of their spare
time at work. This situation may prevent them from focusing on their
studies. Moreover, the working hours could make them feel exhausted
and lethargic at school. Consequently, they tend to be more distracted
compared with unemployed students who have more leisure time.
Step 3: Example
(Provide an example to back up the main idea.)
In particular, weekend jobs take up most of the students’ free time,
which is their best opportunity to unwind, take up hobbies, and revise
lessons to prepare for exams.
Second body paragraph
Step 1: Topic sentence
(Introduce the main advantage in a simple sentence;
note that as this paragraph aligns with the writer’s view, it should carry more
weight.)
However, acquiring practical knowledge is the principal benefit of this
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