The easy way to ielts writing academic Module

other ingredients. After that, lye, which is a chemical substance used in
the production of washing products, is added before all the ingredients
are mixed using a blender.

---

(The first few steps, which are all focused on mixing ingredients, are
described in the passive voice; sequencing words and non-defining relative
clauses are adequately practiced. The provided definition about “lye” is used
in a non-defining relative clause to add extra information.)
4) Body paragraph 2
In the subsequent step, the mixture is heated up at 140-degree centigrade
to be melted before being poured into a mold. The mold is then covered
with a towel to keep the heat for 24 hours. Lastly, the soap, which is
removed from the mold, is cut into slices before being used for personal
consumption.
(A variety of sequencing words and a relative clause are used to ease the
description of the process and enhance cohesion; passive voice is
highlighted.)
Sample writing
The flowchart describes how soap is handcrafted using a few ingredients and
some tools.
Overall, soap is made in 8 main stages, from preparing the ingredients to
cutting it into pieces for home use.
First of all, coconut oil is weighed and melted. At this point, distilled water,
which is precisely measured, is added to the melted oil. Following this step,
some essential oil and a colorant of choice are whisked into the other
ingredients. After that, lye, which is a chemical substance used in the
production of washing products, is added before all the ingredients are mixed
using a blender.
In the subsequent step, the mixture is heated up at 140-degree centigrade to
be melted before being poured into a mold. The mold is then covered with a
towel to keep the heat for 24 hours. Lastly, soap, which is removed from the
mold, is cut into slices before being used for personal consumption.
(155 words)