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This sample writing has thoroughly addressed the task; there is an
appropriate use of the passive voice and non-defining relative
clauses producing a few complex structures. There is sufficient
paragraphing and clear organization of various steps throughout
the writing. Sequencing words and other cohesive devices entitle
this writing to a high band score. Note that there is no extra
information of any kind; the writing only reports the given steps.
(Passive voice is underlined in this sample writing.)
Circular diagrams
Sometimes diagrams show a cycle, where the beginning and the ending steps
meet at some point. The organization of these types of diagrams is the same
as the linear diagrams. There is no difference between the two types of
diagrams in terms of structure, grammatical range, or other writing aspects.
The following diagram shows the cycle of water in nature.
Write a report by summarizing the main steps.
Explanatory sample writing

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1) Introduction
The diagram illustrates how water, which originates from seas and
oceans, goes through a natural cycle to produce rain and snow.
(The verb “illustrates” has introduced the task; two steps, the beginning, and
the ending, are mentioned based on the information from the diagram.)
2) Overview
Overall, the water from oceans and seas is evaporated to form clouds
before falling on the ground as rain and snow in different regions.
(The overview paragraph summarizes what mainly happens in the cycle
without giving details.)
3) First body paragraph
Based on the given diagram, the runoff water, which mainly comes from
snow-capped mountains, groundwater, and the water from seas and