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127) Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All students should be 
required to study art and music in secondary school. Use specific reasons to support 
your answer. 
 
What is the worth of education if cannot cultivate us into well-rounded adults. I do not 
consider education with only the core courses -- math, science, history and English true 
education. All students should be given the opportunity to learn the wonders of art and 
music. 
Art and music are considered liberal education. They are the foundation for everything.
You can't say directly what good art and music what is the point of education if it does not 
cultivate us into well-rounded adults? I don't consider education bring. But without the 
appreciation for art and music nothing accumulates.
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Music tames the mind, it prepares the soul for the daunting tasks we face each day. Music 
brings inner peace and keeps our anxiety down. Students must learn in order to appreciate 
the wonders in music.
Art works in the same way too. Kids ought to be given the opportunity to express 
themselves other than through speech. Art is the formation of the mind. They draw their 
minds out. They may find freedom and relieve in it. 
It is important that secondary school kids be taught art and music. Art and music are the 
basis for learning. Other knowledge builds upon it. Moreover, parents sent their children 
to school with the hope that they excel in the future. Obviously, what our world need are 
no longer plain bookworms. It needs artistic well-rounded adults!