(17)
Or this big baby.
(18) Janet:
I don’t think he’ll be quite that big.
(19)
Okay I’ve got . things everywhere.
(20)
Yikes. ((Janet begins to put things away))
Although this excerpt travels into a future time when Natalie’s brother will have been
born, it is quite nonnarrative. There are no
action
or
interpersonal
dimensions in a
storyworld, though Natalie is comparing herself and her brother in terms of size. Al-
though the
imagination
plays a role, there is no “story” here with a “point” created by
evaluation. This excerpt seems more like a
description
than a narrative, and what lit-
tle identity work is accomplished here is not done through storyworld positioning. By
showing interest in her little brother, Natalie does send a message about herself, how-
ever: that she is interested in how big her brother will be (and probably what her rela-
tionship to him will be in terms of their physical sizes) and that she looks to her
mother for this type of information.
Excerpt 2, like Excerpt 1, is durative rather than instantaneous. It has a few hints
of narrativity, however. In this excerpt, Natalie and Janet are having dinner at home
when Natalie asks why she can no longer sleep in the “cribby” (the crib she slept in
when she was a baby). This inquiry begins a series of questions and answers.
Excerpt 2
(1) Natalie: Mom,
(2) Janet:
Yeah?
(3) Natalie: Why I can’t sleep in the cribby anymore.
(4) Janet:
Why what?
(5) Natalie: Why can’t I sleep in the cribby anymore.
(6) Janet:
Because you’ve got your big girl bed.
(7) Natalie: Who’s gonna sleep in the cribby.
(8) Janet:
Nobody for a while.
(9)
((short pause))
(10) Natalie: Who’s gonna sleep in there for a while.
(11) Janet:
What?
(12) Natalie: Who’s gonna sleep in there for a while.
(13) Janet:
Well someday your baby brother will sleep in there.
A storyworld begins to take form in this excerpt in that there is some indication
of not just “time-traveling” to the future (Beach and Japp 1983) but also a moving
through time within that future world. The temporal gap formed between line 8,
where Janet says that nobody is going to sleep in the crib for a while, and line 13,
where Janet says that “someday” Natalie’s baby brother will sleep there, creates tem-
poral juncture. As in Excerpt 1, however, there is no protagonist, and also as in Ex-
cerpt 1, the conversation is primarily a question-answer exchange. However, Natalie’s
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