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Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the 
key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other 
measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss 
both these views and give your own opinion. 
Sample conclusion: 
In conclusion, while punishments can help to prevent bad driving, I 
believe that other road safety measures should also be introduced. 
Exercise: To practice writing conclusion paragraphs, go back to previous 
exercises for which you have written introductions and body paragraphs. And 
then write different conclusion paragraphs. 
 
 

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 IELTS
 JOURNAL 
 
50 
The step-by-step guide to essay writing 
Exercise: Read the topic below and complete the body paragraphs of the 
essay using the ideas and reasons given here. 
Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best 
route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get 
a job straight after school. 
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Introduction
 
When they finish school, teenagers face the dilemma of whether to get a 
job or continue their education. While there are some benefits to getting 
a job straight after school, I would argue that it is better to go to college 
or university. 
Paragraph 1: benefits of getting a job 
The option to start work straight after school is attractive for several 
reasons. 
(
IDEAS/Reasons:
start earning money, become independent, gain 
experience, learn skills, get promotions, settle down earlier, afford a 
house, have a family)