Ielts-7-Writing

EDUCATIONAL NOTE
Migration is the phenomenon by which some animals, birds, insects, and
fishes come and go according to the seasons. In other words, they move in
response to natural forces like temperature or food supply. Swallows, for
example, migrate from Europe and Asia to southern Africa. They use the
same routes, called migratory routes, and have the same destinations in the
north and south. Many mysteries still occur around migration in nature.

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6.36 FEMALE CRIME
It is found by a survey that the crime rate among young women is
increasing. Spell out the possible reasons and solutions.
Note:
The words in parentheses are more advanced alternatives.
INTRODUCTION
Crime
is defined as “acts that are punishable by the law.” I will discuss why
young women act in this way by referring to their childhoods and their
circumstances and also present one possible solution. (35 words)
BODY
From their childhood days, many young people are not educated strictly
about what is right and what is wrong. Their parents allow them to do almost
anything, so when they leave their homes, they tend to disregard the rules of
society in general and the laws of the communities they live in. For example,
if a parent does not teach a child to respect the possessions of others, the
child will not consider theft as a crime.
Many young women in our cities are forced by circumstances to engage (get
involved) in crime. They, for instance, leave their rural (countryside)
hometowns in search of a better life in the city. Unable to find a job, they are
forced to go (revert) to a life of crime. Streetwise criminals know they are
vulnerable and exploit them, and many become prostitutes or drug addicts.
One solution would be for city councils to start (embark on) job creation
programs with this group in mind. In general, these women have no
qualifications or skills, but there are many possibilities in a city. For
instance, they could assist in traffic control and act as temporary bus
conductors during peak (rush) hours. (189 words)
CONCLUSION

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There are many factors that contribute to young women getting involved in
(engaging in) crime. I have looked at education and unforeseen circumstances
and at a possible solution. The conclusion would be that it is a serious
problem that could be solved. (40 words) (Total words: 264)