Ielts-7-Writing

ALTERNATIVE TO THE FIRST TWO PARAGRAPHS
For many, living in a modern society implies that they can use computers to
some extent (are computer literate). Let’s consider the question in terms of
the role the internet plays in modern society and look at what governments
can do in the schools.
First, although computers in themselves have changed our world
dramatically, the internet is becoming an even greater source of change. For
example, buying and selling goods and services electronically (e-commerce)
by means of the internet is fast becoming standard practice in the business
world. In addition, more universities are reverting to online education as
opposed to normal (conventional) teaching methods.

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6.33 SCHOOL SPORTS
Some people say that sports should not be encouraged at school, as it
causes competition rather than cooperation among students. To what
extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
INTRODUCTION
Confucius said, “Competition is a fact of life.” I believe school sports are
essential to prepare children for adult life. By referring to team sports, the
essay will show that a balance is indeed possible. (35 words)
BODY
When partaking in team sports like basketball, soccer, or volleyball, scholars
have the opportunity to gain experience in what cooperation for the benefit of
the team is like. For example, individual players may have their own ideas
but have to adhere to the game plan to reach the objectives of the team as set
out by the coach.
At the same time, the individual players as a team are able to compete with
other teams. This should teach them the benefits of not being selfish and to
still have the desire and motivation to win. To be more specific, when the
team wins, this can be just as rewarding as when an individual athlete is
triumphant.
In addition, even within the context of the objectives of the team and the game
plan, individuals can excel by displaying specific skills. For example, in
soccer, players like Pelé and Diego Maradona became legends because of
their exceptional skills. However, at all times throughout their careers, they
had the self-discipline to keep in mind what was best for the team as a
whole. (180 words)
CONCLUSION
I could summarize by saying that team sports are one way of achieving a
balance in teaching children cooperation as well as competition. In

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conclusion, we should note that school sports have a vital part to play in
education. (39 words) (Total words: 254)