Ielts-7-Writing

ALTERNATIVE PARAGRAPH
The moral standards of people in general are steadily decreasing. This is one
reason why the crime rate is increasing on a worldwide scale. There should
therefore be no reason why the rate would not increase for this particular
group of the population called “young women.”
VOCABULARY
STREETWISE
: The ability to maintain oneself in a city environment.

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6.37 STUDENT ATTITUDE
There are some serious problems in schools worldwide resulting from
students’ attitudes. Analyze the possible reasons for this growing
phenomenon and give your solutions.
Note:
The words in parentheses are more advanced alternatives.
INTRODUCTION
Teachers are finding it more and more (increasingly) difficult to control their
classes. In this essay, I will look at human rights and parents’ fears as
reasons for this and suggest one possible solution. (33 words)
BODY
In the military and other forces, discipline is thought of (regarded as) a
normal and essential way of life. In the rest of society, however, the idea
(concept) of human rights is becoming more important. Schools find it
difficult to maintain any level of discipline, fearing that when they discipline
students, those students and/or their parents will take them to court (sue them)
on a variety of charges. In addition, like in many schools in Britain, teachers
fear for their safety and even their lives when attempting to instill
(implement) some discipline in the classroom.
Fearing that they will estrange (alienate) their children, parents shy away
from disciplining their children at home. Tough love (being tough / hard /
strict on someone in his or her own best interest) is not a popular concept
these days. Children are, for instance, left to make their own decisions on
how much time and effort they will spend on their studies.
One possible solution would be to reward students who have undergone
some type of disciplinary training. Students could be offered scholarships if
they have attended a certain number of leadership camps or completed a
specified amount of community service during their school careers. (179
words)

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CONCLUSION
I have looked at society and the home for reasons, and I also suggested one
solution to the problem. In conclusion, there are no easy solutions to this
problem. The root of the problem is deeply fixed (embedded) in society, but
we should keep on looking for answers. (48 words) (Total words: 260)