Cayman Islands Writing Exemplar

AF3: 

Organisation

 – Organise and present whole texts effectively, sequencing and structuring

information, ideas, and events

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The author creates a sense of suspense in the opening as a hook to effectively catch the reader’s attention,  

making them want to continue reading. Direction to the text is also given through the author’s opening.  

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The details of the text are ordered in a chronological sequence (expected order for a biography); and through 

effective linking phrases, paragraph breaks, and an abundance of detail, the text transitions from one event to the 

next smoothly and cohesively.  

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The author includes a closing paragraph that provides information on the current status of the individual which 

is appropriate for a biography. However, to fulfill the Level 5 criteria for a closing, the author should write a deep 

reflection, which may include a statement of the individual’s importance or impact on the world, and work towards 

connecting the closing to the opening.