Cayman Islands Writing Exemplar

Level 2a

Assessment Commentary:

AF1: 

Ideas & Voice

 – Write imaginative, interesting, and thoughtful texts

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All the ideas are relevant, though the author only includes two reasons, one of which is personal in nature 

(e.g., football) while the other is reflective of a broader perspective (e.g., getting exercise). The author needs to 

 

elaborate on his/her ideas by supporting his/her her opinion with three well-developed reasons.  

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The author does not showcase individuality, nor is there an evident sense of engagement within the piece.   

The student does not yet bring the topic to life or show that he/she is really invested in the outcome.