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IELTS Journal Writing Task-2


part of its exhibitions. 
On the other hand, some people argue that museums should focus on 
education. The aim of any exhibition should be to teach visitors something 
that they did not previously know. Usually this means that the history behind 
the museum’s exhibits needs to be explained, and this can be done in various 
ways. Some museums employ professional guides to talk to their visitors
while other museums offer headsets so that visitors can listen to detailed 
commentary about the exhibition. This way, museums can play an important 
role in teaching people about history, culture, science and many other aspects 
of life. 
In conclusion, it seems to me that a good museum should be able to offer an 
interesting, enjoyable and educational experience so that people can both 
have fun and learn something at the same time. 
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 IELTS
 JOURNAL 
 
40 
Defining ‘Coherence and Cohesion’ 
If you look at the official band descriptors for writing task 2, you'll find this phrase in 
the band 9 description for 'coherence and cohesion': 
"uses cohesion in such a way that it attracts no attention"
So how do you connect your ideas (cohesion) without attracting too much attention? 
I think there are 2 possible ways: 
1.
Explain your ideas in a logical order so that you don't need many linking 
words. This is probably what you do when writing in your own language. 
2.
Use easy linking words like 
and, but, also, firstly, secondly, finally, for 
example
. These are so common that they attract almost no attention. 
Read the following essay in this lesson, you will notice that there are not long linking 
phrases; however, the linking is subtle, and the focus is on answering the question 
with good ideas. 

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