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So, the entire first body paragraph would look like this:
Firstly, one argument in favor of eliminating university fees is that
there are many learners who are unable to pay for their education,
despite their strong desire to obtain degrees. Without sufficient financial
support, these students have no other way to fulfill their dreams. Even in
cases where students can afford to pay for university, they often have to
take out loans and work part-time to pay for their living costs. This can
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severely affect their grades, and therefore, their future career
development. It can also leave them with large debts to pay when they
finish studying. These financial barriers may discourage highly talented
students from pursuing a university education. 
 
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Body Paragraph 2
 
Again, in this paragraph, we are going to fully explain the second
reason why we believe that university should be free for all learners.
Structure:
1- State One Reason or Argument
2- Expand/Explain
3- Example
 
This 1
st
sentence connects to the question and gives a reason why
you agree.
 
Secondly, no country can prosper without an educated population,
so funding free university education is a long-term investment into the
future of the country.
 
Give an example, adopting a ‘world view’ or a ‘society-wide view’:
Taxpayers' money is arguably being misused by governments on
initiatives like space exploration.
 
Give details of the negative consequences of not helping students
AND the benefits of helping them:
If a country can’t educate its population, there is no sense in
investing large amounts of money into ambitious space projects. A far
more sensible distribution of government funds could allow thousands of
students to fulfill their dreams. This would lead to a more educated
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society, which would, no doubt, benefit the country as a whole for many
years (to come).