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In conclusion, free university education, regardless of income, is
crucial for any society seeking sustainable progress. Expensive tuition
fees may discourage some individuals from pursuing university degrees,
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as young people are often unwilling to carry the burden of their loans
for many years after graduation, making university less appealing. The
government should be responsible for the cost of tertiary education.
Hence, it would be appropriate for the government to better distribute
financial resources in order to do this.
 
 
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Linking Words
1. Use linking words like 
firstly, secondly, thirdly, etc
. They are
relatively simple and make it easier for the examiner to follow the
development of your ideas.
You can use them to separate paragraphs like in the example above,
or you can use them to separate reasons (evidence) within the same
paragraphs like we’ve done in the example below: 
Several studies have proven that global warming is already having a
negative impact on human life. Firstly, it has been shown to affect crops
worldwide, leading to significant shortages in some cases. Secondly,
global temperature increases have compromised food production in some
regions, which has caused inflation and a deterioration of the quality of
life of the people affected. Thirdly, it is causing unnecessary stress, and in
some cases conflict, within already vulnerable sectors of the world
population.
 
 
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