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So, the entire second body paragraph would look like this:
Secondly, no country can prosper without an educated population,
so funding free university education is a long-term investment into the
future of the country. Taxpayers' money is arguably being misused by
the government on initiatives like space exploration. If a country can’t
educate its population, there is no sense in investing large amounts of
money into ambitious space projects. A far more sensible distribution of
government funds could allow thousands of students to fulfill their
dreams. This would lead to a more educated society, which would, no
doubt, benefit the country as a whole for many years (to come).
 
 
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Conclusion
 
In the conclusion part of your essay, you should give a summary of the
main points you’ve mentioned and then restate your opinion so that you
finish with a clear message.
Conclusion 
1- Summary of Main Points
2
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Restate opinion
 
Summary of main points:
In conclusion, free university education, regardless of income, is
crucial for any society seeking sustainable progress. Expensive tuition fees
may discourage some individuals from pursuing university degrees, as
young people are often unwilling to carry the burden of their loans for
many years after graduation, making university less appealing.
 
Restate opinion:
The government should be responsible for the cost of tertiary
education. Hence, it would be appropriate for the government to better
distribute financial resources in order to do this.
 
So the conclusion paragraph would be: