Ielts writing Task & Advanced megapack: ielts academic & General Training

 - Paraphrase the Issue
A growing number of people 
are 
relocating
 from rural to urban areas
in search of 
a better quality of life
.
 
2
nd
 – Give Some Details
However
, 
problems
 such as housing shortages, traffic congestion, and
pollution can have a serious impact on that quality of life. This essay
will examine these issues and propose potential solutions.
So the whole introduction looks like this:
 
A growing number of people are relocating from rural to urban
areas in search of a better quality of life. However, problems such as
housing shortages, traffic congestion, and pollution can have a serious
impact on that quality of life. This essay will examine these issues and
propose potential solutions.
 
Body Paragraph 1
 
The first issue + solution…
 
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This 1
st
 sentence connects to the question and signals what we are
going to talk about.
Firstly,
the 
dense concentration of people in cities 
has resulted in a
shortage of affordable housing
.
 
2
nd
sentence gives a specific example or explains the problem in
more detail.
In several large cities, for example, a large number of people end up
living in the suburbs since the shortage of space means renting in the
city is too expensive.