Ielts sample essays collection

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make 
comparisons where relevant. 
You should write at least 
150
words. 
Example 1
The bar graph indicate
s
figures of 100 million passenger miles travelled (PMT) that 
had incidents and injuries by transportation in 2002. 
The highest 
number 
of incidents and injuries were from demand response by 260 
PMT and 170 PMT respectively. In comparison, travel by bus 
showed
incidents and 
injuries by almost the same figures by 70 PMT and 60 PMT which 
is 
in the same 
trend with commuter rail with incidents by 20 PMT and injuries by 15 PMT
,
but still 
the 
lowest figures compared with other mode
s
of transportation. Heavy rail and light 
rail 
ranked
second and third of 
the 
lowest numbers by 50 PMT and 70 PMT of 
incidents and 40 PMT and 45 PMT of injuries respectively. 
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In conclusion, the fastest transportation was by commuter rail whereas demand 
response was the most dangerous transportation from information from the chart. In 
my view, people should consider to travel by commuter rail. 
(151 words)
Score: 6.0 
Detail comments 
(TA) Task Achievement
Presents an overview with information appropriately selected. 
(CC) Coherence and Cohesion
Presents information with some organisation, but an inadequate use of cohesive 
devices.