Ielts sample essays collection

Comment [30]: 
“good” is very low level.
Try not to use it 
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combination with a special free entrance for the poor. As for as I know, most 
museums are either entirely free or charge a fee but not the combination of these two. 
To summarise, I encourage museums and art galleries to charge an entrance fee 
according to a person’s profile. It should be kept free of charge for those who can’t 
afford a normal living so that everybody has access to this wonderful world of culture. 
(419 words) 
Score: 7.5 
Detail comments 
(TA) Task Achievement
Sufficiently addresses all parts of the task. The response is well developed with 
supported evidence and examples. 
(CC) Coherence and Cohesion
Sequences information and ideas logically. Manages all aspects of cohesion well. 
Uses paragraphing sufficiently and appropriately.
(LR) Lexical Resource
 
Uses a sufficient range of vocabulary to allow some flexibility and precision. Uses 
less common lexical items with some awareness of style and collocation. May 
produce some errors in word choice, spelling and word formation.
(GRA) Grammatical Range and Accuracy
 
Uses a variety of complex structures. Produces frequent error-free sentences. Has 
good control of grammar and punctuation but may make a few errors.
 

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