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IELTS SAMPLE ESSAYS COLLECTION 
VOLUME 1 – Academic Training 
http://ieltsonlinetests.com
 
up their children decently due to the lack 
of 
ability to gain better understand
ing
and 
tolerance toward
s
them. In this circumstance, there is a high risk that those kid
s
will 
end up using drug
s
excessively to experience the good feeling that they couldn’t find 
from family. 
I personally think the experience of illusion that drug brings is unharmful per se but 
the fact some drugs can cause addiction affects 
people 
detrimentally especially the 
young one
s
. First of all, being
an addict
reduces the productivity of teenage
r
s at 
school. They will
take
longer 
to 
focus on acquiring knowledge or achieving their 
academic goals any more. Secondly, addicti
on
victims will lose their interested in 
physical activities and end up exposing themselve
s
to various health problems. Some 
addict
victims who tried to quit drugs 
describe
all the terrible sym
p
toms that they 
have to suffer from as nauseous, 
a 
bad- temper, easily irritable mood
and
depress
ion.
Therefore, all the above will stop them from developing holistically and 
having a head start in life. 
In conclusion, various factors from families and societies has contributed
to
drug 
misuse and excessive use among young people and its effect eventually will ruin the 
future of those youths. Therefore, given this situation, I suggest that 
the 
government 
must impose stricter law
s
and regulation
s
on media product
s
to ensure inappropriate 
items are out of teenagers’ reach. It is also parent
al
responsibility
to gain better and 
positive influences over their children and keep eyes on what they are watching.