Ielts sample essays collection

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IELTS SAMPLE ESSAYS COLLECTION 
VOLUME 1 – Academic Training 
http://ieltsonlinetests.com
 
China to ameliorate the problems 
of the
seasonal shortage of water. Furthermore, we 
are able to learn some sp
orts
and characters from that. For exampl, some ancient 
rituals are still conserved to transmit a social memes and as a media to make us 
evoke our public duty. 
In conclusion, I believe that history is full of resources we can learn for some factors, 
although some people hold a different belief. 
(285 words) 
Score: 6.0 
Detail comments 
(TA) Task Achievement
Covers the requirements of the task and presents a clear overvie of main trends, 
differences or stages. Clearly presents and highlights key features but could be more 
fully extended. 
(CC) Coherence and Cohesion
Logically organises information and ideas. There is clear progression throughout.
Uses a range of cohesive devices appropriately although there may be some under 
use. 
(LR) Lexical Resource
 
Uses an adequate range of vocabulary for the task. Attempts to use less common 
vocabulary but with some inaccuracy. Makes some errors in spelling and or word 
formation, but they do not impede communication. 
(GRA) Grammatical Range and Accuracy
 
Uses a mix of simple and complex sentence forms. Makes some errors in grammar 
and punctuation but they rarely reduce communication.
 
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