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Comments
This essay followed the following pattern of Example Two:
Body 1: Disadvantage
Body 2: First Advantage
Body 3: Second Advantage
As the writer thinks that overall it's positive, you do not want to have two
paragraphs with negative reasons and one with positive. That would not be
coherent.

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Tablets, Computers, and Children Essay
In this essay you have to discuss whether allowing children to use tablets
and computers has more positive or negative impacts. 
As is usual with IELTS essay questions, this is a topical issue as it is
something that you will commonly see debated in the media and amongst
people generally. 
This is the question:
More and more parents are allowing their children to play on
computers and tablets as they think that children should learn
technology skills.
Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
Analysing the Question
The key part of this question is this part:
More and more parents are allowing their children to play on
computers and tablets

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Although it mentions why parents are allowing this (they think that
children should learn technology skills) you don't have to focus on the
issue of technological skills.
You should mention it as it's in the question, but you can write about
any arguments for or against children using computers and tablets.
This is because you are not discussing whether there are more advantages
or disadvantages of learning technology skills via computers and tablets.
This is only something some parents think happens so it can't be treated as
a fact - it may not actually be the case in your opinion.