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Comments
The essay would score a highly on all the the 
four criteria used for marking
IELTS essays
. 
Task Response: The essay answers all parts of the question, ideas are
relevant and extended appropriately.
Coherence and Cohesion: The essay is well-organised and easy to read at
the sentence and paragraph level and makes good use of linking words and
connectors.
Lexical Resource: There is a wide range of accurate and topic relevant
vocabulary and a good understanding of collocations and idioms.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy: There is also a good mix of
grammatical structures that are accurate, and a good level of complexity in
the grammar. 

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Mobile/Cell Phone Essay
In this cell phone essay you have to discuss the advantages and
disadvantages of the way in which cell phones and the internet dominate the
ways in which people relate to each other socially. 
This is the question:
These days, cell (mobile) phones and the internet are very important to
the ways in which people relate to one another socially.
Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
Analysing the Question
This is a type of question that has appeared in the IELTS test a few times:
The impacts of technology on the way we communicate with each other

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With IELTS essay questions, you always need to note carefully exactly what
you are being asked to write about. 
In this case it is about cell / mobile phones and the internet. So you must
write about both. Sometimes an essay may just ask you about one or the
other. 
This is also important in this cell phone essay: