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Comments
The family size essay is well-organized - the first sentence of the
introduction introduces the topic and this is followed by the thesis which
clearly states the issues that will be addressed:
Why family size decreases

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How this affects society
Each paragraph then addresses one of these parts in turn.
The first sentences clearly illustrate the topic of each paragraph:
One of the principal reasons for smaller family units is...
This can impact on society in a number of ways. 
The conclusion then repeats the thesis
In conclusion, family size has fallen due to birth control and education,
and this can impact on debt, access to resources, and economic growth.
The family size essay is well signposted with linking words and phrases to
lead the reader through the ideas, giving reasons and results. For example,
from body paragraph one:
One of the principal reasons...
This may be due to...
The result of this is...
Another important factor is...
which means that...
Consequently,...
All of the content clearly answers the question and the ideas are properly
explained so there is no ambiguity.

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Having Children Later in Life Essay
This is an essay on having children later in life. 
It is on causes (or 'reasons') and effects. You have to explain why men
and women are deciding to have children later on in their life, and then
explain how this can impacts those families and society. 
As always, you should read the question carefully to make sure that you
don't miss out any of the tasks that you need to address. 
You should spend at least a few minutes doing this at the start of the test
before you start to brainstorm your ideas and write.
This is the question: