Ielts made Easy

And an overview: 
The most noticeable change is the replacement of many green areas with several 
major infrastructure projects.
Don’t just say that ‘…
there have been many changes
’. You need to choose some specific 
points. Look for what the major changes have been. 
Organization 
The answer is well organized, with paragraphs based around the features – Transport, 
Business and Housing. It may not be possible to organize it this way – it depends on the map.
As you were shown previously in this unit, there are other ways to organize it. The important 
thing is to make sure you identify the main changes and organize your description logically. 
Language
A mix of language of location has been used to describe the information, and this is 
highlighted below: 
To begin, there were several major changes to transport in the town. An airport has been 
built 
beside
the river on the outskirts of the town. In addition to this, a ferry port was 
constructed 
on the
 
far east
 coastline, with a new railway extension line 
passing by
 the ferry 
port, continuing along the coast and crossing 
over
 a new bridge so it connects to 
the west 
side
 of town.
There have also been changes to the business sector in Templeton. A factory can be seen in 
the south east of
the town behind the new railway line, and a supermarket has been built 
over 
the river in the west of Templeton, 
running
 
alongside
 a new road. 
The residential landscape has also altered, particularly