Ielts-7-Writing

CONCLUSION
In conclusion, it can be said that the situation could be changed. (39 words)
(Total words: 259)
ALTERNATIVE VIEW
It depends on how 
standard of living
is defined. The above essay was based
on the assumption that standard of living is defined in materialistic and
money (monetary) terms. However, standard of living can also be defined in
terms of the emotional, physical, and social quality of life. For example, in
the countryside, there is less pollution, stress, and crime than in the cities.

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6.45 COMPUTER EDUCATION
The computer is widely used in education today. Some people believe
that teachers will not play an important role in the classroom in the
future. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
INTRODUCTION
Like many other jobs (professions), education is bound to change
dramatically in the future. Computers replacing teachers will be discussed in
terms of the advantages of computers and the reasons why fewer people think
of (consider) a teaching career. (37 words)
BODY
First, it should be mentioned that a computer is a type of robot. It has many
advantages that could be used (utilized) in classroom situations. To be more
specific, computers do not have to be trained at great cost. As soon as a
program has been written, the software can be copied to as many places as
we want. Computers do not get tired (exhausted) and do not need to take a
vacation. This makes them very cost effective. They are not moody on some
days and bright-eyed and bushy-tailed on others. In addition, they do not need
food (nourishment), housing (shelter), clothes, and so on.
Second, we have to take note that for many reasons, fewer people want to
become teachers today. This is particularly so in the case of men (males). It
is said, for example, that teachers do not receive good (satisfactory) salaries
(compensation/remuneration) and instead look for other jobs (occupations)
where they are able to earn much more. In addition, because of the changing
attitude of students toward discipline, the working environment in the schools
is becoming less attractive. In some countries, teachers nowadays do not feel
safe in the classroom at all. (189 words)
CONCLUSION

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I touched on the advantages of computers and the reasons for fewer people
choosing education as a career. This leads us to conclude that computers are
definitely going to play an important role in education in the future. (38
words) (Total words: 264)