Critical academic writing part 1 exercise 1

EXERCISE 2
A.

JEWELRY	PHOTOGRAPHS	MECHANICAL OR ELECTRONIC DEVICES	. ART OR MUSIC	. CLOTHING
- Silver - Delicate - Round - Shine - Luxurious - Glamorous	Faded - Serious - Happy - Funny - Ekspression	- Useful - Convenient - Practical - Modern - Advanced - Fast	- Cheerful - Dramatic - Enjoy - Calm - Colorful - Unique - Entertaint	- Colorful - Worn - Silk - Simple - Stylish -cotton

B .
The Internet is useful for finding information quickly.
The machine is too big to be practical for most private homes.
The colors are faded, the flavors nonexistent.
The sinking of the Titanic was very dramatic.
she likes colorful outfits.

EXERCISE 3
he plans to take very good care of his grandfather's car because one day he will use it to travel all the states and cities his grandfather visited when he was young.
EXERCISE 4

1. 
   

1 .C. The writer has strong feelings about his grandfather's Cadillac convertible
2. Very happy
3. I will fix it my self, i plan to take very good care of my grandfather's car because someday i will use it to travel to all states and cities.
B.
1.V
2. C. Bau
3.a. It connects the writer to his grandfather


EXERCISE 5
TOPIC SENTENCE
-tems the author describe : a car (my grandfathers' car)
-the author's general feeling about the item: i own a car that has special meaning for me because it belonged to my grandfather
SUPPORTING SENTENCE
Baground information about the item : I own a car that has special meaning for me because it belonged to my grandfather. When he was a young man, he saved money so he could buy a beautiful car to use on trips around the country.
part ( descriptive details about the item )
He finally bought a Cadillac convertible. It was white and blue with silver trim. There were white circles on the tires, and it had a powerful horn that made people jump out of his way. The seats were also white, but the dashboard was black. The steering wheel had a brown leather cover. The mats were gray and always clean.
part (details about the author's feelings)
the writer's feelings are that he is happy because he still has a car that means a lot to him, and he is also touched because when his grandfather died the car was entrusted to be cared for by him.

concluding sentence
I plan to take very good care of my grandfather's car because someday I will use it to travel to all the states and cities that my grandfather visited when he was a young man.
EXERCISE 6
topic sentence
what are u going to describe? - i Will describe about my Cat
what is your general feeling about the possession?
- i'am so happy to have my lovely cat ciko.
SUPPORTING SENTENCES
- Write some notes about the background/history of the possession :
Chiko is one of my kittens. chiko was born after I lost several of my cats because panleu virus. One of several dead cats named Chiki.

-What are some details you can describe the possession :

Chiko is a mischievous cat who loves sunshine. Chiko has orange fur, a short tail, round eyes, an oval face, and a fat cat. Because chiko has a resemblance to chiki, from here I named it Chiko.

-What are some details you can use to describe your feelings about the possession :
Chiko reminds me of chiki, i love him as much as i love my other cats. I love to play with him, tickle his belly tummy, and often give cats snack. I give more attention when Chiko playing outside, because around of my house there are a lot of stray male cats. I often hug him while holding him and that make me gets one scratch, lol.

Concluding Sentence :
I’ll always taking care my cat with all of my heart because it’s my lovely pet.