Critical academic writing part 1 exercise 1

PART 2
EXERCISE 1

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Jewelry	Photographs	Mechanical or electronic devices	Art or music	Clothing
My favorite kind of jewelry is gonna be rings, I have a lot of shiny rings. I like rings because rings can make my fingers look elegant and pretty.	I have a really special and meaningful photograph to me, and it’s a photograph of me and my cat. I adore my cat so much, my cat is the real definition of cuteness. My cat has two beautiful eyes, adorable tiny paws and two perky ears.	I can not live without an electronic device called smartphone. I can’t even survive a day without a phone. Cell phones are very useful and bring many benefits to my life. I've owned a lot of cell phones, but my most favorite is the blue sky colored cell phone that can be played even in underwater.	Art and music is my life. I save a lot of amazing art that I've found on an app called pinterest. I personally like semi-realistic art because I feel calm and peaceful whenever i look at it. And for the music, i have a favorite musician called ‘Arctic Monkey’, their music always has astonishing tones and stunning rhythm.	I live for hoodie and a hoodie was made for me. We're a match made in heaven. I love wearing hoodies because they are super comfortable and cozy. Hoodies are also fashionable, I can mix and match hoodies with anything. I can go anywhere just by wearing a hoodie.

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Jewelry	Photographs	Mechanical or electronic devices	Art or music	C lothing
M y favorite kind of jewelry is gonna be rings, I have a lot of shiny rings. I like rings because rings can make my fingers look elegant and pretty.	I have a really special and meaningful photograph to me, and it’s a photograph of me and my cat. I adore my cat so much, my cat is the real definition of cuteness. My cat has two beautiful eyes, adorable tiny paws and two perky ears.	I can not live without an electronic device called smartphone. I can’t even survive a day without a phone. Cell phones are very useful and bring many benefits to my life. I 've owned a lot of cell phones, but my most favorite is the blue sky colored cell phone that can be played even in underwater.	A rt and music is my life. I save a lot of amazing art that I've found on an app called pinterest. I personally like semi-realistic art because I feel calm and peaceful whenever i look at it. A nd for the music, i have a favorite musician called ‘Arctic Monkey’, their music always has astonishing tones and stunning rhythm.	I live for hoodie and a hoodie was made for me. We're a match made in heaven. I love wearing hoodies because they are super comfortable and cozy. Hoodies are also fashionable, I can mix and match hoodies with anything. I can go anywhere just by wearing a hoodie.