Level 4c
Assessment Commentary:
AF1:
Ideas & Voice
– Write imaginative, interesting, and thoughtful texts
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The author effectively answers the “who,” “what,” “where,” “when,” and “why” questions using relevant details
specific to the singing event.
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The author focuses on providing the reader with facts and details of the singing event. Their individuality and
writer’s voice does not shine through.
AF2:
Organisation
– Produce texts which are appropriate to task, reader, and purpose
• The author successfully writes to a specific audience with the appropriate tone of a news article.
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Although the title is typical of what is generally seen in newspapers, the author could attempt to catch the reader’s
attention with a more creative title that could incorporate figurative language (e.g., “Singing Students Sounded
Like Saints”).
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