Cayman Islands Writing Exemplar

       AF2: 

Organisation

 – Produce texts which are appropriate to task, reader, and purpose

•  The author attempts to connect with the reader; however, it is unclear if this text is directed to a specific audience. 

The opening and closing of the text are beginning to showcase the author’s enthusiasm for the event; however, 

the details are lacking an animated or amusing tone. 

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The author’s title is predictable and directly states the event (e.g., “A Day at the Beach”). It has yet to catch the  

reader’s attention. 

AF3: 

Organisation

 – Organise and present whole texts effectively, sequencing and structuring

information, ideas, and events

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The author does not attempt to use a simple hooking strategy, like asking a question or using a noisy word;  

however, he/she does provide details and sets a context for the recount with a simple sentence (e.g., “I had the 

most amazing day at the beach!”). 

• 

The details of the text are ordered in logical sequence, and with the effective using of linking words and phrases 

to show the passing of time, the details of the event are beginning to connect smoothly.  

• 

The author includes a short sentence that expresses his/her personal feeling about the event (e.g., “I had the 

best day ever!”).