Cohesion
The answer in this section should be 30 to 40 words. Therefore, your response
to the question will be
around three or four sentences. For your answer to be cohesive you will only have to use linking
words, pronouns, and other referencing words like these/those/that/this.
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APTIS Writing Part 3: Sample Question #1
Part 3: You are a member of a travel club. You are talking to other members in a chat room.
Talk to them using sentences. You have 10 minutes in total. Answer all three questions.
Sam: Hi, welcome to the club. Can you remember the first time you went on a journey by yourself?
What was it like??
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Jose: What are the most interesting places to visit in your country?
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Fernanda: What is the most exciting journey you have been on?
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How to answer the question?
The thing about the
first question
is that it is difficult to answer it successfully with ‘No’. Therefore,
you will need to talk about the journey. The way to help do this is to ask yourself ‘What
happened?’ and to explain what it was like- you can ask yourself ‘How did I feel?’
The question is about the past and so you need past tenses. It is a story and so you should try to use a
least one of the
following- past continuous, past perfect and past perfect continuous with the past
simple.
With a story you should use sequencing words- first/second/then/finally. You may want to give
explanations or results- because/so/so that/as a result. To talk about how you felt you could use
adjectives that describe feelings or
adverbs like- unfortunately, luckily, thankfully.
The
second question
is easier. You only need the present simple unless you explain the history of
these places.
With a question like this, students often give a list of places. This won’t get you any
marks.
You should say where and to achieve task fulfillment you need to say why unless you’re over your
word-limit. The example of question 2 below asks for your opinion and so you need to use
expressions for opinions.
The
third question
is similar to the first. You need to explain what the
journey was and why it was
exciting. Again, it is a story in the past and you could use one of the following- past continuous, past
perfect and past perfect continuous with the past simple.
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