50 Successful Ivy League Application Essays

Write Multiple Drafts
“Write as many drafts as necessary. I wrote draft upon draft in order to 
perfect my essay. Dedicate as much time to the essay as needed. This essay can 
determine whether you are admitted or not, take your time on it. There were 
countless weekends where I’d stay home just to work on my essay.”
—Enrique Vazquez, University of Chicago

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50 Successful Ivy League Application Essays
Don’t Try to Follow a Formula
“Try not to follow any formula that you think admissions officers are look-
ing for. You should write about something that is personal and paints a picture 
of who you are as a person. Provide an honest portrayal of yourself which 
outlines why you are going to be an asset to the university. Many of the people 
you are competing against to receive a spot at the school will have similar test 
scores, class rankings, and grades so the essay and interview is an opportunity 
for you to differentiate yourself.”
—Anne McPherson, Yale University