Variant variant 2

Yours faithfully
Boltaeva Dilorom.
Dear Sir/Madam.
I hope this reaches you in the best of health. With reference to your recent e-mail I am willing to express my views. I am Dilorom who has been involved actively in this club for 2 years and it is of essence for me to provide my attitude towards actions happening around the club. I am writing this mail in response to your letter which I have received recently. I am pleased to share my suggestions about how to inspire young minds reading books instead of watching TV.
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I hope my recommendations will be taken into consideration while making decision on the matter and look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully
Boltaeva Dilorom.