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4) Body paragraph 2
In contrast, A2 is positioned in the north of the city beside the river.
Although it is near the housing state, there is no direct access to this
area. A2 is not linked to the city center either. However, there is a road
connecting this spot to the business district, which is located in the south
of the city.
(There are some comparative structures along with the description of the
location. Focusing on A2 makes the paragraph quite clear. The language of
location and appropriate prepositions describe different spots.)
Sample writing
The map illustrates the structure of a city, where two proposals, A1 and A2,
are considered for the construction of a school.
Overall, A1 and A2 are situated in the vicinity of the residential area and the
city center. A1 is in the southwest of the city, and A2 is placed in the
northern regions. Both locations are far from the park in the east and the
business district in the south.
A1, which is roughly situated in the southwest of the city, is accessible to the
city center through a railway, which crosses a river just before it enters the
city center. This river runs through the city from north to south. A1 is also
adjacent to a housing state in the northwest; however, there is no direct road
to this area from A1. The city center is linked to a park, which is in the
eastern regions.
In contrast, A2 is positioned in the north of the city beside the river. Although
it is near the housing state, there is no direct access to this area. A2 is not
linked to the city center either. However, there is a road connecting this spot
to the business district, which is located in the south of the city.
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