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Conclusion Step 1: Summarize topic sentences



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Conclusion
Step 1: Summarize topic sentences 
(Paraphrase cons and pros.)
Step 2: Restate your opinion
In conclusion, even though modernity in farming has heavily cost the
environment and ecosystems, from my point of view, it has increased
crop yields to supply high food demands, and most importantly, it has
tackled the universal issue of starvation to no small extent. I opine that
this industry will develop further over time.
Sample writing
Today’s methods of farming have taken over conventional cultivation
techniques in many areas. Although these modern farming techniques have
substantial negative impacts on the environment, they supply the high
demand for food, whose necessity cannot be overlooked, considering global
famine and malnutrition.
Causing irreversible environmental pollution is the major drawback of
modern agricultural techniques. These ways of farming utilize significant
amounts of chemical pesticides and fertilizers, which on the one hand, help
extend the crop production season and make plants more resistant to diseases,
and harsh weather conditions, but on the other hand, they cause harm to their
surrounding environment.
 
Indeed, these chemicals add pollutants to water,
which leaches into rivers that eventually find their way to the oceans. These
unfavorable substances create water contamination that tremendously affects
marine ecosystems.
However, one of the eminent benefits of modern farming methods is its


potential to feed the ever-growing human population. Indeed, current
cultivation methods have been able to supply the food demand for the
increasing number of people worldwide. It is estimated that half of the
world’s population would suffer famine if it were not for modern machinery
and farming equipment. For example, the famine crisis is centered in less
affluent African countries, where agricultural skills are not updated due to
various social and economic issues.
Given all the facts, I believe that although human survival has heavily relied
on modern ways of farming, whose destructive impacts on the environment
cannot be neglected, these advanced methods have brought about new food
options, such as genetically modified foods, which have minimized the
invisible injection of toxins into our bodies. Furthermore, new cultivation
techniques are likely to be devised in the light of healthier food production in
the foreseeable future.
In conclusion, even though modernity in farming has heavily cost the
environment and ecosystems, from my point of view, it has increased crop
yields to supply high food demands, and most importantly, it has tackled the
universal issue of starvation to no small extent. I opine that this industry will
develop further over time.
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