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Step 4: Introduce the second disadvantage 
(This sentence acts as the
second “Topic sentence” holding the second main point of the paragraph, and
it is better to be in a simple sentence.)
Another demerit of the tourism industry is the loss of local culture.
Step 5: Explanation
(Explain the second disadvantage in 1-2 sentences.)
In other words, the prevalence of overseas traveling results in loss of
cultural identity over time. Local businesses and restaurants have
noticed a high demand for more customized foods and services to satisfy
their international customers; thus, authenticity will soon fade away
permanently.
Step 6: Example
(It is a good idea to provide at least one example in the
entire paragraph.)
For instance, most restaurants in Japan have tailored their food items to
appease their international visitors. This alteration regrettably means