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An example of this is Europe, an attractive tourist destination in the past
two decades. A significant number of people visit Europe every year for
entertainment and inspiration. Therefore, most European countries have
been economically flourishing.
Second body paragraph
Step 1: Topic sentence
(Introduce the main disadvantage(s) in a simple
sentence.)
One of the most distinctive drawbacks of tourism is air pollution.
Step 2: Explanation
(Explain the first disadvantage in 1-2 sentences.)
It is a fact that tour operators are in an intense competition to make
more profits. In doing so, they offer international no-frill flights and tour
packages, which give rise to air pollution levels.

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Step 3: Example
(Provide an example to develop the paragraph.)
Indeed, airline companies are liable for 55% of global air pollution.
(Statistics are useful tools in providing examples.)
Step 4: Introduce the second disadvantage 
(This sentence acts as the
second “Topic sentence” holding the second main point of the paragraph, and
it is better to be in a simple sentence.)
Another demerit of the tourism industry is the loss of local culture.
Step 5: Explanation
(Explain the second disadvantage in 1-2 sentences.)
In other words, the prevalence of overseas traveling results in loss of
cultural identity over time. Local businesses and restaurants have
noticed a high demand for more customized foods and services to satisfy
their international customers; thus, authenticity will soon fade away
permanently.
Step 6: Example
(It is a good idea to provide at least one example in the
entire paragraph.)