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megacities among youngsters, who might lack parental supervision as
parents are likely to be fully occupied, making ends meet living a highly
competitive lifestyle.
(Keep in mind that there is no need to provide an example for every cause or
every effect. In this paragraph, I provided an example to support the second
cause, which was not fully extended.)
Conclusion
Step 1: Summarize causes and effects
(Develop a complex sentence to
summarize causes and effects. Note that giving your personal opinion is not
asked for in this topic.)
To conclude, megacities invite crowds of people to their pool of
opportunities and readily available facilities; however, an increase in the
number of urbanites results in gridlocks, air pollution, and high crime
rates among the youth.
Sample writing
Overpopulation is on the rise in big cities worldwide. Some factors, including
urbanization and the presence of job opportunities as well as advanced
facilities, are the principal causes of this phenomenon; however, it inevitably
affects societies, where heavy traffic, air pollution, and high rates of crime
take their toll on the city dwellers.
The leading causes of overpopulation in metropolitan areas are the
availability of employment possibilities and public amenities. As a result of
urbanization and developing megacities, a growing flux of people has
migrated to these areas from small towns and villages, following their dreams
of living a comfortable life. Urban sprawl has brought about job
opportunities, which are usually missing in developing regions. Individuals


are likely to be given a chance to acquire knowledge and improve their skills
to be qualified for numerous job vacancies awaiting them in big cities.
Moreover, masses of the population move to these areas to access public
facilities. For instance, equipped hospitals and healthcare centers are scarce in
small towns, and in case of emergencies and road accidents, casualties need
to be transferred to the nearest big city for medical examinations or surgeries;
this could result in delayed recovery, permanent physiological injuries, or
death in unfortunate occasions.
Traffic congestion and air pollution are known to be the most adverse effects
of overpopulation. Overcrowded subways and roads during rush hours are the
unavoidable results of living in overpopulated urban areas. Consequently,
people end up wasting considerable amounts of time commuting daily.
Furthermore, exhaust fumes raise carbon dioxide levels in the air, generating
air pollution, which significantly affects the public’s health. Besides,
overpopulation gives rise to crime rates. An example of this is juvenile
delinquency, a common situation in megacities among youngsters, who might
lack parental supervision as parents are likely to be fully occupied, making
ends meet living a highly competitive lifestyle.
To conclude, megacities invite crowds of people to their pool of opportunities
and readily available facilities; however, an increase in the number of
urbanites results in gridlocks, air pollution, and high crime rates among the
youth.
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