The easy way to ielts writing academic Module

This is an example of a high band score for writing task 1 as there
is a clear overview, paragraphing, and organization of the given
data. Details (numbers and periods) are sufficiently provided using
specific vocabulary and phrases to describe trends throughout the
writing. Comparative language has been effectively practiced in
complex 
and 
compound-complex 
structures 
accurately.
(Vocabulary of approximation and details are underlined in this
sample writing.)
Pie charts
Pie charts feature trends using percentages. Superlative structures,
which focus on comparing the largest and the smallest sections,
prove effective in describing them. However, keep in mind that it is
easy to skip specific vocabulary in these writing types as trends
look different than trends in line graphs and bar charts.
Topic #3
The pie charts compare household expenditures for Canada and Peru in
percentage for the year 2000.
Summarize the information by reporting the main features and making
comparisons.

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Explanatory sample writing
1) Introduction
The pie charts give information on the percentage of household expenses
for Canadians and Peruvians in 2000.
(“The pie charts” are introduced. Effective paraphrasing is applied: the word
“expenditure” is altered to “expenses”; the verb “compare” is changed to
“give information on”; “Canada” and “Peru” as countries are paraphrased to
“Canadians” and “Peruvians” as nationalities.)
2) Overview
Overall, both countries spent the largest amount of their annual budget
on housing. On the other hand, the lowest amount of money was