School uniforms should be abolished in all schools

Introduction: 2-3 sentences

#1 – general view

#2 – paraphrase of the topic

#3 – thesis/position

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School uniforms should be abolished in all schools.

Discuss to what extent you agree or disagree with this statement.

Nowadays, most schools have their own dress-code. However, many people think that they are no longer useful thereby, stating that they should be abandoned. I partly agree with this view.

Body 1: 6-7 sentences (+)

#1 – purpose of the paragraph (men bu fikrga qushilishimni bir nechta sabablari bor)

#2 – first main point

#3 – supporting statement

#4 – example

#5 – second main point

#6 – supporting statement

#7 – example/result

On the one hand, there are a couple of reasons why I support this opinion. Firstly, it leads to a number of discomfort for students. That means, students should spend a lot of extra time on preparing their special uniform by ironing or washing them regularly. For example, a single student may spend 2 hours in a week for this preparation according to some researches. Secondly, it is humans right to choose what to wear. To be more precise, people’s taste is really different and urging them what to wear is unacceptable. Consequently, school uniforms play no role in an education system.

Body 2: 6-7 sentences (-)

#1 – purpose of the paragraph (men bu fikrga qushilishimni bir nechta sabablari bor)

#2 – first main point

#3 – supporting statement

#4 – example

#5 – second main point

#6 – supporting statement

#7 – example/result

On the other hand, school uniforms may be important because of two reasons. Firstly, dress-code can provide social balance between students, who came from different backgrounds. To clarify this opinion, I would state that if students wear the same cloth, they do not feel any embarrassment to their peers. For instance, in Japan most students wear the same cloth and therefore they do not feel any discomfort towards their friends. Secondly, dress-code means strict discipline. If people wear the same cloth it means they obey particular rules, meaning that student are very loyal. Therefore, I believe uniforms are important.

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In conclusion, I partly agree that schools should be uniform-free as it may cause discomfort and their rights. However, because of providing social balance and strong discipline they should not be left.

Nowadays, most schools have their own dress-code. However, many people think that they are no longer useful thereby, stating that they should be abandoned. I partly agree with this view.

On the one hand, there are a couple of reasons why I support this opinion. Firstly, it leads to a number of discomfort for students. That means, students should spend a lot of extra time on preparing their special uniform by ironing or washing them regularly. For example, a single student may spend 2 hours in a week for this preparation according to some researches. Secondly, it is humans right to choose what to wear. To be more precise, people’s taste is really different and urging them what to wear is unacceptable. Consequently, school uniforms play no role in an education system.

On the other hand, school uniforms may be important because of two reasons. Firstly, dress-code can provide social balance between students, who came from different backgrounds. To clarify this opinion, I would state that if students wear the same cloth, they do not feel any embarrassment to their peers. For instance, in Japan most students wear the same cloth and therefore they do not feel any discomfort towards their friends. Secondly, dress-code means strict discipline. If people wear the same cloth it means they obey particular rules, meaning that student are very loyal. Therefore, I believe uniforms are important.

In conclusion, I partly agree that schools should be uniform-free as it may cause discomfort and their rights. However, because of providing social balance and strong discipline they should not be left.