Question Type 1: Basic Description Questions

Fluency: the sentence begins with a linking phrase and contains redundant language.

Vocabulary: one topic-related word – superstar.

Grammar: complex structure and use of complex tense – "I would have to choose..."

Going on to my next point which is why he is famous, I really need to add that he is a world-renowned martial arts film star as well as being a successful director. In fact he was probably the first Chinese actor to achieve blockbuster success in Hollywood.

Fluency: the sentence begins with a linking structure and contains 3 more connecting structures: "I really need to add that", "in fact", "as well as".