Практикум по синхронному переводу с русского языка на английский

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   не случайна — "not fortuitous" sounds a lot better than "is not
   accidental" or "is no accident." Another possibility would be antonymic
   translation: "this choice is a deliberate one."
   

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   принимая — More often than not Russian gerunds require a qualifier
   in English: "by adopting," "in adopting," or a phrase defining temporal
   circumstances: "when they adopted."
   

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   разработать — while "work out" is the dictionary translation, "draw
   up," "produce" or "develop" are often better renderings.
   

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   не менее значимыми — can be rendered as "just as important" or
   "equally important" rather than literally as "no less important."
   

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   история последних лет — can be translated as "the history of the last
   few/of recent years" or "history" can simply be dropped: "the last few
   years have shown/proved."
   

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   усилия международного сообщества не пропали даром — the efforts
   of the international community have not been in vain/futile/come to
   naught, or, antonymically, "have achieved something."
   

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   ...ведут трудные переговоры о послевоенном укладе жизни, продви­
   нулись вперед процессы репатриации беженцев — in a sentence of this
   

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type with several clauses separated by commas, "and" must be inserted before the last clause on the list — "and progress has been made regarding the repatriation of refugees." If the interpreter fails to realize that this is the final clause, and has failed to insert "and," to produce a grammatical sentence he can add "etc."

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