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The Department of Police and Crime Prevention
It is the responsibility of the police to apprehend criminals.

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They must also take steps to reduce crime and make communities
safer in general.
A greater number of police officers should be stationed on the
streets, according to the report.
Police personnel should be perceived as members of the
community rather than as a separate entity.
They should be involved in the education and prevention of drug
use and abuse
The police should maintain close touch with educational
institutions.
They should concentrate their efforts on students who have dropped
out of school.
These teenagers may become affiliated with gangs as they grow
older.
Punishments/Prisons
Fines are employed as a form of punishment for small infractions.
If the crime is of a more serious nature, the most typical
punishment is imprisonment
Some criminals are a danger to society as a whole.
They are imprisoned in order to protect the safety of the general
public.
Prisons Have Their Drawbacks
A group of criminals is assembled
In addition, they form friendships with other offenders
A large number of offenders reoffend after being freed.
Having a criminal record makes it more difficult to find work.
Rehabilitation
Prisons also have the goal of rehabilitating inmates.
Prisoners are provided with educational and vocational training.

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Prisoners should be taught personal skills as well as job-specific
abilities.
Punishment has the potential to make inmates' behaviour worse.
Rehabilitation is intended to help them become better citizens.
Rehabilitated inmates are less likely to commit crimes again.