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Explanatory sample writing
1) Introduction
The line graph compares the number of tourists traveling overseas from
2000 to 2015, and the pie chart shows the percentage of traveling to 4
different countries in the year 2010.
(Note that the line graph and the bar chart are both introduced; using
synonyms and similar words, the topic is paraphrased to avoid repetition.)
2) Overview
Overall, there was a slight increase in the number of men and women
who traveled over the period. By far, Canada and England were the
most popular countries to visit in 2010.
(The line graph’s trends are described, and the pie chart’s main features are
mentioned clearly in comparative structures.)

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3) Body paragraph 1
Based on the line graph, the number of men traveling abroad accounted
for over 4 million, almost double that of women in 2000. However, these
trends had opposite directions in the next five years. Female travelers’
figure had a sharp rise to a peak of just above 4 million while it plunged
to half that of male tourists. In the following decade, men’s trend
gradually went up and recovered, unlike women’s trend, which had a
significant fall before rising to just under 3 million in 2015.
(As the line graph shows frequent fluctuations, there are various contrasting
structures. Some data has made the description clear, and various time
expressions and a switch between noun/verb phrases have helped avoid
repetition in style. Note that the paragraph is only focused on the line graph
and does not mention anything about the pie chart; this is to avoid confusion.)
4) Body paragraph 2
According to the pie chart, Canada had the highest number of travelers,