Ielts-7-Writing

CONCLUDING STATEMENT
10. To conclude, in my opinion, it is impossible to make a sweeping
statement in this regard. (37 words) (Total words: 248)

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6.7 BIGGER CITIES
Modern cities are becoming bigger and bigger. What are the reasons for
this? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of large cities.
Note:
The words in parentheses are more advanced alternatives. The
numbers refer to the standard essay pattern given in 
chapter 4
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INTRODUCTION
1. The number of very large cities (also called megacities) in the world
is steadily increasing.
2. In this essay, I will deal with some reasons for and advantages and
disadvantages of this phenomenon. (32 words)
BODY
FIRST PARAGRAPH
3. The main reason why cities are becoming bigger (rapidly expanding)
is that people are moving there in search of jobs (employment
opportunities).
4. For example, the main activities of commerce and industry are
usually located in and around a very large city (metropolis). Rural
people are under the impression (have the perception) that life in the
city will be easier (more affluent) than in the villages and on the
farms.
SECOND PARAGRAPH
5. There are some advantages to large cities.
6. For instance, more people can use the same facilities (infrastructure)
like roads, railways, water distribution, electricity supplies,
telephone lines, and public transportation services like buses and
subways. In addition, large cities result in the creation of many small
businesses in the informal sector.
THIRD PARAGRAPH

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7. Large cities, however, have some definite (distinct) disadvantages.
8. For instance, there often is an increase in crime (criminal activities).
Poor (destitute) people resort to mugging, housebreaking, and theft in
an attempt to survive. Gangs and syndicates make use of (utilize) the
situation for organized crime. In addition, housing, medical, and
educational standards often worsen (deteriorate), as existing
structures cannot cope with the sudden increase (influx) of large
numbers of people. The massive slum area in Mexico City is a good
example of this. (184 words)