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Master IELTS Essays 

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 Ebrahim Tahassoni 



 

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Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. 



However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer 

nations in such areas.

 

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 

 

Model Answer: 

Many underdeveloped countries nowadays face serious problems trying to provide their 

citizens with decent education and health facilities, as well as in other areas like trade. 

However, I disagree that developed nations ought to support these countries, and think 

they should try to stand on their own feet instead.

 (49 words)

 

It is usually possible for poor countries to raise enough money to overcome their 



predicaments since the source of their shortcomings is usually deep corruption and 

domestic mismanagement, which have resulted in their funds being embezzled by 

dishonest officials and their affairs in areas like education, health and trade run by 

unqualified authorities. If they are in need of support in such areas, they should first 

make an effort to eradicate the abovementioned issues before asking for aid from the 

outside world.

 (82 words)

 

Furthermore, the money that the governments of developed countries have belongs to 



their citizens because it originates from their taxes, customs duties, and national 

resources. It should therefore be spent on providing better facilities like health centres and 

universities, and improving business environments for their own citizens, not for people 

living elsewhere in the world.

 (55 words)

 

Some may argue that the decline in living conditions in developing countries could result 



in the migration of their citizens to developed countries in search of a better life, which 

involves serious financial and cultural concerns for rich nations. However, public 

investment in improving border control and defense structures can render these concerns 

insignificant. 

(54 words)

 

In conclusion, I think developed countries should not aid poor countries, as their funds 



should be invested in the betterment of life for their own citizens. Undeveloped nations 

can often overcome their shortcomings in commerce, health and education on their own 

through eliminating corrupt officials and improving their management practices.

 

(50 words)



 


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