is given?
e
Students read and discuss the three alternatives in pairs and then feed back to
the class. Focus especially on the techniques that make one version better than
the others.
Answers
1 Doesn’t say exactly where, when and how.
2 Time vague, doesn’t say who the victims were, and it introduces irrelevant
information.
3
The best option
: it answers who, where, what and how.
f
Students read and discuss the three alternatives in pairs and then feed back to
the class. Focus especially on the techniques that make one version better than
the others.
Answers
1 Journalist’s opinion is too obviously stated.
2
The best option
: the headlines and photos are now more fully explained, using
the words of the victim. Use of police quotation to reassure the public.
3 The message is the same as (2), but is less interesting to read as it doesn’t
contain any direct quotations.
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