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To conclude, financial stability and emotional maturity are vital for being a good parent; since
young people in their twenties may lack one or both of them, I feel that waiting until they are in
their thirties to get married is a good idea and this trend will benefit the society.
STRUCTURE OF AN ESSAY
You were given an opinion essay which means you had to pick a side.
So,
● Do you agree that it’s better for people to get married in their 30s?
or
● Do you disagree that it’s better for people to get married in their 30s?
Once you pick a side, you can start planning your essay and then writing it.
Introduction
● Question Paraphrased - There has been a rise in the number of people who get married in
their thirties and beyond.
● A thesis statement - In my opinion, this is a beneficial practice because at this age most
of the people are financially stable and emotionally mature to raise a family properly and
ensure a better future for them.
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