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Central idea: Taking up a hobby that is easy and relieves stress.
Supporting points:
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Example:
People take up different hobbies to spend their free time and come out
of their work stress and they take up the activities which they enjoy
doing, it may either be challenging activities or any activities that are
easy to take up.
● One of the examples may be writing poetry, where you may have just
put your thoughts into writing, it may not be that challenging for
people who love writing and they enjoy the task as well.
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Central idea: Difficult hobbies people enjoy doing.
Supporting points:
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● This may be very challenging for them, but they take time and learn this activity and
then make it as a hobby and enjoy it.
Example:
● To quote an example, film editing or song editing, this might actually need some
experience with sound engineering yet some people make this as a hobby.
Conclusion
● I think hobbies should be based on the individual likings and not based on how difficult or
easy the hobby is. When a person takes up a hobby, it should satisfy oneself and the
person taking it should enjoy what he does.
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